Hi Trustians,
The following pupils have already posted their opinions. Do visit for a read now.
- Andy
- Amabel (more improvements can still be made. Take note of my comments)
- Aurora (Great opinions on the positive effects of martial arts. Do read it.)
- Chuan Kai (Pending one more piece of news. Remember to read others' blogs)
- Gera (Read others' opinions to improve)
- JLQY (Bird flu news: you can comment on how Hong Kong can educate their citizens on the indirect effect of smuggling fertilised eggs from China. Elaborate on why some farmers still do it despite knowing about this. Panda news: What you wrote are more on the news report. Do add in your own opinions. What you think will happen if this continues, eg pandas may go extinct and comment on why you would not want this to happen, etc.)
-Riz (Good comments for news 2). Work on sentence structure to improve.)
-Sya22
-Xue Er (You selected thought-provoking news. Good)
-Hlin (Hlin writes excellent opinions after researching and thinking deeply into the issues mentioned in the news. Do read her opinions to get a better idea on how to write good opinions backed by excellent general knowledge. Keep it up, Hlin. :-)
-Trx (great improvements again. Good)
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