Wednesday, December 17, 2008

How to learn to form indepth opinions for News

Dear Trustians,

Many of you have asked me how to go about learning how to form your opinions. Thus, I have written a post to explain some critical steps to you. Yes, the key word here is learning to form your opinions. Thus I am not expecting a regurgitation of others' opinions when I ask you to read others' blogs to learn.

Here are a few critical steps that diligent Trustians do to ensure that they learn how to form indepth & valid opinions:

1) Read others' opinions (especially the good ones) to learn:

- thought process (i.e. the questions they asked themselves while thinking through, how they focus on the big picture before narrowing down to the details etc)

- the skills (i.e. how they put their views across logically, how they sequence ideas, the type of research they did to learn more about the issues, etc.)

-the things to avoid (i.e. read others' comments on the post's opinions to understand how to improve.)

-apply your thinking skills to comment on others' opinions (i.e. to practise self questioning during the thought process)

Remember: You do not need to make all the mistakes yourself. You can learn from others' mistakes as well as strengths.

2) Then select another piece of news you are interested in and do the following to practise the application of your newly-acquired thought process and skills.

- Listen to the news and read up on all related news articles in the newspapers. (e.g. Reduction of public smoking areas in 2009)

- Write down your main ideas/argument (e.g. Reduction of public smoking areas next year is good. It discourages smoking in public.)

-Elaborate on your main ideas by giving examples (i.e. Then discuss why this discouragement is good. E.g. Smokers will not be able to smoke in public. As a result, young children will have lesser chance of seeing people smoking in public and so will less likely pick up smoking later in life.)

- At this point, you can also bring in some health related issues on smoking. Research on the key issues mentioned in the news. E.g. Why is smoking bad? You can comment on the bad effects of smoking and passive smoking after doing your research. If you are not sure how to research, try doing an internet search on the questions you want to ask on google or wikipedia (i.e. Links are found on the right side of this page under the cbox) Do remember that you should not regurgitate or copy from the source of your info too. Always summarise and select the main points that help you in explaining your views. In addition, if you are able to use specific or good vocabulary (i.e. picked up during reading or research) in your opinions, you should make a conscious effort to practise doing so.

By following the above steps, you will be able to acquire more extensive generally knowledge and vocabulary on the issues that interest you. Thus, you will have more opinions to give when asked about the issues. I hope this post helps you. For those who have already finished all the 8 pieces of news & opinions before reading this post, it will be great if you could do another 2 pieces as a form of practice. Do drop me feedback on the usefulness of this post and any enhancements that you would like to see in the comments page.

Monday, December 15, 2008

Dear Trustians,

The following Trustians have yet to post any opinions. I really hope to read their views soon. Do give them a call to remind them if you happen to be their best friends.

- c.c. Huanying
- Dao Wen
- Dasuki
- Faz
- Ed
- gjakbar
- Jaimond
- Jie Wen
- Jun Hao
- e.c.
- Rachel
-Saung
-tn_gladys
-Vinith
-Xinye

The following Trustians have to redo their blogs:
- Jon (all 8 pieces of news are done at one go. Thus, if one is wrong, everything is wrong. Please redo after thinking deeply into the issues. Skimpy work will not be accepted please. )
-Shu Zhen (Most opinions seemed fine but I am unable to comment due to the lack of a comments page. I would like to explain the main issues in some of your articles to you. Please add one and inform me. )

Sunday, December 14, 2008

The Last Lap (4th Week)

Dear Trustians,

The following active members have already completed their news & opinions. Do feel free to read through:

- Andy
- Aurora (Very well written and indepth opinions on news 2). Do read it on her blog. Keep it up)
- Gera (Read Hlin's comments to improve.)
-Riz
-Hlin (Highly insightful and well-planned thoughts. Do read through to learn. Keep it up, Hlin. I think your vocabulary has improved tremendously this holidays through your reading. Your sentences are well-written now. Way to go. Do continue to read.)
-Trx (Very steep learning curve. You have got the main point. Good! Keep it up! The next step is to use the points gathered from your research to support your opinions. :-) Well done! Way to go...)

Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Your opinions count! (3rd Week)

Hi Trustians,

The following pupils have already posted their opinions. Do visit for a read now.

- Andy
- Amabel (more improvements can still be made. Take note of my comments)
- Aurora (Great opinions on the positive effects of martial arts. Do read it.)
- Chuan Kai (Pending one more piece of news. Remember to read others' blogs)
- Gera (Read others' opinions to improve)
- JLQY (Bird flu news: you can comment on how Hong Kong can educate their citizens on the indirect effect of smuggling fertilised eggs from China. Elaborate on why some farmers still do it despite knowing about this. Panda news: What you wrote are more on the news report. Do add in your own opinions. What you think will happen if this continues, eg pandas may go extinct and comment on why you would not want this to happen, etc.)
-Riz (Good comments for news 2). Work on sentence structure to improve.)
-Sya22
-Xue Er (You selected thought-provoking news. Good)
-Hlin (Hlin writes excellent opinions after researching and thinking deeply into the issues mentioned in the news. Do read her opinions to get a better idea on how to write good opinions backed by excellent general knowledge. Keep it up, Hlin. :-)
-Trx (great improvements again. Good)

Friday, November 28, 2008

Second Week's Opinions

Dear Trustians,

Here are this week's early birds again. Do read and comment on their posts.

-Aurora (Great improvement. Way to go....)
-Hlin (Even better than before. Do read them.)
-Gera (Quite insightful)
-Brand (Please read others' blogs for ideas on how to write indepth opinions)
-Andy (Great improvement. Great comments from Hlin for news 1) too)
-Amabel (Better than before.)
-Amanda (Standard comments. Can do better. Take note of my comments to improve)
-Chuan Kai (Can do better. Read others' opinions to improve.)
-Gladwin (take note of my comments to improve.)
-gytan (slightly better than before. can do better. Please read others' blogs for ideas)
-JLQY (comment on how the people in Philippines can educate and get their people prepared in your opinion. Where applicable, do some research on the topic before commenting. For the news on the Bus Crash, do you mean that only medical student will grow up to help society? It seems this way when I read it. Think about how you can rephrase this sentence to get your idea across.)
- Mayank (pending one more)
- Muah (news 1) is quite insightful. Keep it up. Think about how you can elaborate and explain your opinions.)
-Riz ( an improvement here. Good. May have to do a bit of research before commenting especially on the global issues.)
-Sya22
-Xue Er (an improvement here. Good)
-Regine (good improvement)

Friday, November 21, 2008

First week's news opinions

The following children's news & opinions have been posted:

-A.Yeo (Good suggestions by HLin)
-Hlin (Good ideas)
-Aurora
-Gera
-Brand
-Riz (commented)
-young-galz (got to include a few lines on what the news was about before writing your opinions)
-Xue Er
-Andy(great effort, good)
-Mayank (pending one more)
-GY Tan(only one, pending the other)
-Jon(think deeper before writing your opinions on only 2 pieces of news please)
-Amanda (Insightful thoughts. Do read through her opinions and my comments for future opinions.)
-Chuan Kai (Have to think deeper into the issues. Please read others' blog to improve.)
-Gladwin
- JLQY (Quite sound comments. Keep it up. Please add in the comments page. Otherwise, I can't comment at all. Do read others' blogs to improve too. Try to write about your views rather than what was reported in the news.)
Well done, early birds! Do visit the blogs to read their opinions & comments.
-Muah (done. news 1) is quite good. Think about how you can write more indepth opinions by reading others' blogs.)
- Raphael
- Chealseakindom (Good try. Got to understand the news before writing your opinions)
-Sindhu
-Sya22