Second Week's Opinions

Dear Trustians,

Here are this week's early birds again. Do read and comment on their posts.

-Aurora (Great improvement. Way to go....)
-Hlin (Even better than before. Do read them.)
-Gera (Quite insightful)
-Brand (Please read others' blogs for ideas on how to write indepth opinions)
-Andy (Great improvement. Great comments from Hlin for news 1) too)
-Amabel (Better than before.)
-Amanda (Standard comments. Can do better. Take note of my comments to improve)
-Chuan Kai (Can do better. Read others' opinions to improve.)
-Gladwin (take note of my comments to improve.)
-gytan (slightly better than before. can do better. Please read others' blogs for ideas)
-JLQY (comment on how the people in Philippines can educate and get their people prepared in your opinion. Where applicable, do some research on the topic before commenting. For the news on the Bus Crash, do you mean that only medical student will grow up to help society? It seems this way when I read it. Think about how you can rephrase this sentence to get your idea across.)
- Mayank (pending one more)
- Muah (news 1) is quite insightful. Keep it up. Think about how you can elaborate and explain your opinions.)
-Riz ( an improvement here. Good. May have to do a bit of research before commenting especially on the global issues.)
-Sya22
-Xue Er (an improvement here. Good)
-Regine (good improvement)

First week's news opinions

The following children's news & opinions have been posted:

-A.Yeo (Good suggestions by HLin)
-Hlin (Good ideas)
-Aurora
-Gera
-Brand
-Riz (commented)
-young-galz (got to include a few lines on what the news was about before writing your opinions)
-Xue Er
-Andy(great effort, good)
-Mayank (pending one more)
-GY Tan(only one, pending the other)
-Jon(think deeper before writing your opinions on only 2 pieces of news please)
-Amanda (Insightful thoughts. Do read through her opinions and my comments for future opinions.)
-Chuan Kai (Have to think deeper into the issues. Please read others' blog to improve.)
-Gladwin
- JLQY (Quite sound comments. Keep it up. Please add in the comments page. Otherwise, I can't comment at all. Do read others' blogs to improve too. Try to write about your views rather than what was reported in the news.)
Well done, early birds! Do visit the blogs to read their opinions & comments.
-Muah (done. news 1) is quite good. Think about how you can write more indepth opinions by reading others' blogs.)
- Raphael
- Chealseakindom (Good try. Got to understand the news before writing your opinions)
-Sindhu
-Sya22